I read this about five times and I cannot make sense out of it:
"The electric automaker had the strongest overall loyalty to make, highest conquest percentage, alternative powertrain loyalty to make, and ethnic market loyalty to make. (The overall loyalty to manufacturer, though, went to General Motors, although that was the only category that GM won.)"
What category does "that" refer to? The "overall loyalty"?
Is this my poor reading comprehension or is that contradicting itself? Who won the "overall loyalty", Tesla or GM?
-Don- Reno, NV